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Drown In Sorrow
Contributed by
Crash
on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 01:12:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i walk in darkness
i live in pain
you may think i'm crazy
i think i'm sane
life itself always hurts
or is it just a dream?
if it aint real
nightmarish does it seem
we walk a path,
but where do we get?
at the end
we know it wasn't *****.
i hold a burden
oh how it smarts
to feel so many
broken hearts
but as i walk
through swamps of sorrow
i know life's there
just gotta make tommarrow
but will it come?
i doubt it would
cuz the blood
feels so good
as it flows
down my wrists
so few people
will be *****
tho many say
i will be missed
you may say
i could make tommarrow
but why will i
drown in sorrow?
Copyright ©
Crash
... [
2004-02-17 01:12:27]
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Re: Drown In Sorrow
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 05:13:57 PM AEST
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Damn, crash! I feel for ya, bud. I hope things are now better than
this. Life is sometimes crap, isn't it? But you got a wonderfully
creative poem out of this pain. Keep writing.
It's an amazing healer!
~Breezy |
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