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someone else
Contributed by
nisha
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Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:17:35 AM in AEST
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I hate this face that I possess
I hate this life it causes stress.
This me that I see staring back at me
In this mirror of fate sought after me.
I never think about love cause its not meant to be,
I mean whod want to be in this heart, whod want the key.
Night after night I cry myself to sleep
But day after day promise myself I wont weep.
I am in pain but I dont know why
I t wont go away and now I want to die.
I hate myself so much some words I cant say
So Ill tell it to god on my knees I pray.
God please cure my pain please give me a pill
So I wont hurt myself or possibly kill.
I want to slit my wrists and watch the blood flow down
Yes, then I know to hell I am bound.
I hate this pain that I am going through
If it were you Im sure you would to.
God, I promise I will never hurt myself
But I will always wish I were someone else.
Copyright ©
nisha
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2004-02-17 11:17:35]
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Re: someone else
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:23:51 AM AEST
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| WOW, this is so good, and emotional, it was a good read that i culd to relate to, well done |
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Re: someone else
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by Ruby1987 on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 11:24:36 AM AEST
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Dis iz cool. Listen up don't worry coz a wize person told me dat one moment of pain equals 100 happy moments.
Good poem, keep writing
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Re: someone else
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 01:10:06 PM AEST
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NOTHING separates us from the love of God. Keep writing and keep praying. It's hard to believe, but most of us have been where you are.
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Re: someone else
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:05:26 AM AEST
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| Very powerful. I know exactly what you mean. |
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Re: someone else
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by bhavnas on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:45:15 AM AEST
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| a very nice self reflective poem but y so pessimistic...u r the best ,have the faith n trust ur instincts...when u can write so beautifully ,aren't u blessed?...smiles...bhavna. |
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