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Defying you
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 12:52:54 AM in AEST
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Don't need your shoulder
to cry on this time.
Don't need your hand
to help me up again.
Don't you dare try
to help me again
I'll save myself this time.
I'm refusing to need you
and I refuse to just die.
You will never know
the places I'm going.
Tearing my heart out
just to get over you.
At one time I even
crucified myself to be
held by you.
Now my wounds won't close
and I'm bleeding too fast.
I have to heal or
I'll die this time.
My freedom is mine
but I've nothing left to lose.
My soul is screaming and
angels are dying in my head
from the pain you have caused.
So just be gone from me
don't turn around 'cause...
I'm no longer yours.
I'm no longer shackled.
I'm no longer bound.
Falling to the ground as
heaven rejects me...
I defy you.
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-02-18 00:52:54]
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Re: Defying you
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 12:57:01 AM AEST
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Full of hate.
Wonderful. |
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Re: Defying you
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:02:19 AM AEST
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Good *****.
D.J. |
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Re: Defying you
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:03:34 AM AEST
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What I meant to say was "good write" (stupid anti-cursing censor! AHHHH!!!!!) :).
D.J. |
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Re: Defying you
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 01:05:24 AM AEST
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| Hell yeah, go you! Very nicely done, a powerful write. |
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Re: Defying you
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by bhavnas on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 03:24:11 AM AEST
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| very gd ,love to read poems of strength...defied r those who know not how to love....smiles...bhavna. |
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Re: Defying you
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 10:30:50 AM AEST
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| Lots of anger in this poem. Anger is born from being hurt deeply. It is like an ivy and it will choke out everything when you feel so much pain. Your words spoke volumes to me in this poem. I liked this one alot. Kie |
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Re: Defying you
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by RochelleLloyd on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:27:21 AM AEST
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| Wow, Full of anger! Enjoyed very much. Good Write! |
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Re: Defying you
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:30:25 PM AEST
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I wouldn't say "full or hate," I'd say "full of healing." There comes a time to move on and to know that you will never be shackled like that again. You've expressed that well.
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