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Forget Me Not
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 05:38:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I cried a tear
or two today
while I packed
your things away.
I carefully placed
each piece in a box
as not to break
forget me nots.
Pictures we took
memories we made
side by side
together they laid.
I stood there for
a minute or two
gently whispered
"I love you."
Then I placed the lid
on the box
as I promised
to forget you not.
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2004-02-18 05:38:26]
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Re: Forget Me Not
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 05:45:18 AM AEST
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How beautifull!
I can feel the luv in this write.
I'm so sorry for your loose but u have turned his legacy into a masterpeice!
Jus can't find a word/words to do this justice!
luv in it's rare form, yet solid as concrete.
luv, hugs,
emy |
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Re: Forget Me Not
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by slayer_015 on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:11:23 AM AEST
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Your husband was a lucky man to have someone who can speak such beautiful things about him.I hope the future brings you healing and comfort.I will pray for you.I am very sorry for your loss.Rember,from the hottest fire comes the strongest iron.You will make it through.
Brian |
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Re: Forget Me Not
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 07:14:02 AM AEST
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This was truly heartfelt, what a lovely tribute to your husband. Easy words are sometimes more powerful! Well done, I hope you can be happy again.
Ali xx |
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