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Look into my Soul
Contributed by
AmaNdAsHepArD
on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Look into my eyes
And see the pain
Try to feel a day
Touch the open wounds
That are still bleeding
Kiss my mind
And get cut on
The razors that
Protect me
Feel the burns
And swim
In the rivers
Of my tears
Cover yourself
In my darkness
Let my demons
Eat your flesh
And my shadows
Surround you
Look into my eyes
And see the pain
Try to feel ad day
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2004-02-18 18:18:51]
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Re: Look into my Soul
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 09:13:34 PM AEST
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| I loved this whole poem until I got to the last line and I got lost I didn't know what "Try to feel ad day" meant? Lots of deep pain in your poems but i'm drawn to those kinds. Hang in there!! Kie |
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