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Skin Burst
Contributed by
Suz
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Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:39:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Skin over sinew and muscle
Taught over black veins with storms flowing through
Pale over delicate joints
Thin over glassy eyes
Too much of this skin
Took some off, let it shed
Thick blade on pale skin
Catches the dim light hitting glassy eyes
Sending shocks through arteries
Sucking tears down an ugly, ugly face
Skin over sinew and muscle parts
Snaps over black veins
Simpy disconnects from the joints
Floats in the sun ray like fairy dust.
Copyright ©
Suz
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2004-02-18 18:39:02]
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Re: Skin Burst
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 09:05:24 PM AEST
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A graphic dictation of life, Had a good flow to but I was a little lost as to the final line.
But all in all it was a good write. |
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