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Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 02:24:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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...i try to live but the world is black...
I'm writhing through this surrealistic torture...
The blood runs down my spine...
Stay with me eternally, my love...
...stay...
WHY MUST YOU LEAVE?
Why must you go,
why must I
run
...i try to live but the world is black...
So now I walk on pulverized legs.
Teetering on protruding shards of bone,
my flesh drags in bloody strings behind me
following you
IS IT REALLY SO BAD??
I don't care what they say
we can make it!!
we will make it
...
i try to live but the world is black...
Finally I have found you.
You grab me, shake me hard
back and forth
back and forth
back and forth
your hands slice, cleave, carve
my skin, and the blood flows
from gaping slashes breathing life
My eyes roll back in my head...
And now I come...
To you
I come
SEE?
It wasn't so hard!
We did it!
We did it...
I'm bleeding!
I'm bleeding
I've tried to live, now the world is red.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-02-19 02:24:06]
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Re: Try
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 02:50:44 AM AEST
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| Sad topic but good write! |
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Re: Try
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:17:38 AM AEST
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this was crazy, but very good. I love the imagery u put in all yer poems so dark and demented. Keep up the writing!
Bobo (Joel) |
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