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Eroded Thoughts
Contributed by
fldadn1
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Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:37:46 AM in AEST
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Cuts too deep
leaves its stain
its why you weep
its who you blame
wrongful thoughts
though was there
right or not
no one cared
a sour arm
that helps you up
what they call friendship
i call luck
a endless mind
with no time
thoughts it thinks
reality and dreams
of such things
like thought itself
why im put on earth
with the cards im dealt
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2004-02-19 03:37:46]
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Re: Eroded Thoughts
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by Amber on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 10:49:36 AM AEST
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| i really think that this poem was good. it was deep and well put together. i really like your style of writing! |
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Re: Eroded Thoughts
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:11:34 AM AEST
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Oooooh! I know those "why am I here" moments. You've captured the immensity of those thoughts. Nice job.
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