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forever linked
Contributed by
merry
on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 02:08:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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*~~~~~~*~~~~~*
one, two, three
lost hearts
gentle souls
willing to take chances
foolhardy
naive too
but what are we do?
our hearts call
for attention
ignored too long
painting with words
what we cannot seem to hold
such dear friends now
we confide
our deepest secrets
we no longer hide
we are three
bound by fate
or so it seems
what careless scheme
brought us here
in gentle care we find ourselves
restored
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-02-19 14:08:29]
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Re: forever linked
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 02:39:45 PM AEST
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Oh merry, we all need each other so much. I am dealing with a very angry friend today who has decided not to need anyone. So sad. You hit it dead on.
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Re: forever linked
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 02:46:44 PM AEST
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Yes maam...the links of the daisy chain are made of iron. Beautifully written Gaille as always
Roses
Larry
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Re: forever linked
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:51:16 PM AEST
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yes this is very good i liked it alot
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Re: forever linked
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 05:36:08 PM AEST
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| Words so true Gaille ... "in gentle care we find ourselves restored" ... beautifully written ... Jan |
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Re: forever linked
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 05:47:12 PM AEST
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| i cannot begin to tell you what this poem means to me nor how it has touched me, i sit and weave daisys, love you, huggies, nessa xxx |
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