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-Bottled Release-
Contributed by
gem48
on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 02:12:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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On the outside,
Shattering smiles mask tabooed thoughts,
But deep in the depths
Hidden from most,
Deaths plan is a foot.
Seeping along neurons
Guaranteed destruction upon contact,
Internally irreparable.
Tantalisingly out of reach,
A cowards way out
Sits and grins up at you from the bottle below.
Copyright ©
gem48
... [
2004-02-19 14:12:03]
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Re: -Bottled Release-
(User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:54:19 PM AEST
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I wouldnt change a thing it is wonderful
michelle |
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Re: -Bottled Release-
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by Arius-Inues on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 08:51:24 PM AEST
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| I thought that it was well writen bu ti do agree that there need to be a few cahnges; only becouse it dosent flow. But hey this is just an oppinion take it for what its worth. Keep wrighting! |
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