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DREAMS ON HOLD (Sensual)
Contributed by
Del
on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:29:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'll never forget the wonderful dreams
We shared with each other at night.
Now those dreams are just memories
But they still fill me with delight.
You aroused my passion like nobody could,
You filled my heart with such desire.
A heart that was cold for oh, so long,
Was now filled with a flaming fire.
Your loving arms reached out for me
And held me so close to you.
Two lips kissed me so tenderly,
We shared a love so true.
In dreams our two bodies trembled
As we made love so passionately.
Sharing those dreams with each other,
Was the ony way it could be.
Now my faithful heart is empty.
Once again it feels so cold.
Because of an unpredictable event
Our wonderful dreams are on hold.
Copyright ©
Del
... [
2004-02-20 00:29:08]
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Re: DREAMS ON HOLD (Sensual)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:36:39 AM AEST
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This is sensual and very beautiful. You didn't ruin it with graphic wording. You made the love shine through and made it meaningful. I truly enjoyed reading this piece of work. I wish you luck in whatever the problem is and you can soon be together as one.
Rita |
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Re: DREAMS ON HOLD (Sensual)
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:42:16 AM AEST
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Hi Del,
this is so good,i hope your dreams al ways come true.
in God time they will.this is an excellent write. |
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