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Number 87
Contributed by
merry
on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 11:45:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ remaining in sequence number 87 worn out like an old sweater shot full of wholes, unraveling one good sleeve won't suffice reckless sport and folly caked in mud she stands forlorn thinking did not save her nor keep her in his good graces loose threads find their way free cold spring reveals its purpose renew and start again the counting continues even though he is so tired now he doesn't know how to stop anger fuels his intention but there is no fire left burned down to ash nothing will ignite again for everything is lost
gmm2004
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Re: Number 87
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:44:00 PM AEST (User
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There is always such depth to your writing Gaille. You are so damn talented it hurts.
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Number 87
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:12:02 PM AEST (User
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From the title to the ending, a remarkable poem. Kie |
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Re: Number 87
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:16:04 PM AEST (User
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Merry, You overwhelm me. That is a compliment.
Stitch |
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Re: Number 87
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 02:04:54 PM AEST (User
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Dear Mer, I always find your poetry splendid, and that not all....all the words that accompany that.......elegance, grace, and beauty of the human existence.
How you can do this without having experienced it, is beyond my comprehension. it is simply splendid once again.
love;
consue
P.S. must be that chair you sit in? |
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Re: Number 87
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 02:06:25 PM AEST (User
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this poem is amazing, i think reading you has helped keep me sane, i can sit back and gain a perspective about life and love that may have gone over my head without the down to earth style and expression you share so freely in such creative style, hugs n' love nessa |
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