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Lost View
Contributed by
Asatru
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Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:46:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am coming for you,
Do you see me yet?
I am soaring through an ocean of a cloud on my boat,
Trying to find you,
To get close to you,
I only want a word,
Anything beside goodbye,
I feel like I am flying through the lakes,
I sail my cloud for you,
For the love of you,
For my love of your beauty,
For my love of your mind,
Your company,
Your warmth,
Sympathy,
Love,
I hope it's there,
The lakes have fallen upon the clouds,
Making it hard to see,
Can you see me yet?
I can see you,
See the light around you,
Your beauty radiating,
I see the light as I peer through the thick lake,
With the telescope I see your face,
Beautiful face,
I hit a rock,
And I'm lost on my way over,
Can you see me yet?
***** Cats cannot swim,
Telescope still in hand,
Still focused on your beauty,
I don't bother with the hole,
Knowing I am going to sink,
I will do soon,
No swimming in the clouds,
I would rather die seeing your beauty,
Then die knowing I cannot get there,
Die with your beauty in mind,
It's at my neck,
Still moving forward,
Meters away,
It's blocking the bottom of my lense,
I grasp it tighter,
Your still in my view,
It's above the lense,
I hold it tighter,
Purple hands,
Without you in sight,
I let out my breath,
To die in the clouds.
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Asatru
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2004-02-20 17:46:25]
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Re: Lost View
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:23:25 PM AEST
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Oh Asatru this relationship is so onesided in your mind only! Why can't you tell her how you feel?
Are you afraid she will tell you goodbye? But how.......you haven't yet said Hello?
Beautiful poem......yearning again and again......please tell her before it is too late.....her beauty will fade, and someone else she will meet!
I enjoyed reading this, good poem
lovingcritters
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