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My Love
Contributed by
confused_nutter
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Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:03:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Think of the tear falling from the eye,
Rising and swelling as we say goodbye.
Light footsteps slowly fading away
Forgotten rules, you cannot obey
From the darkness I feel your hate
My beating heart, you penetrate
My mind attacked, my soul oppressed
The innocent being, never blessed.
The lonely conscience of the forgotten soul
For each mere thought, there is always a toll
Their feelings they pour, onto the dust
To be wanted, needed, their only lust
Yet they still wander, alone in strife
The pointless existence of a meaningless life
Can nobody see? Will nobody try?
To this vicious world, they say goodbye…
She searches for her forbidden lover
But he has left, and found another
Her tears of blood, upon the floor
The figure of hate, stands at the door
This final breath, her fading pulse
The emotions inside, were truly false
Now as she approaches, the gates of hell
To the devil her soul, she is forced to sell
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2004-02-20 19:03:47]
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Re: My Love
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by arden on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:24:31 PM AEST
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WOW!!!! awesome!! that was so good im at a loss for words. great write by a talented poet.
Arden |
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Re: My Love
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by silent on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 11:11:36 AM AEST
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| That was um very good to say the least. I can't really say much else, except it has left an impression on me, you are a very talented writer. ;) |
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Re: My Love
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:42:06 PM AEST
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this is so damn good..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: My Love
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by kissez_x0x0_hugz on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 09:42:46 PM AEST
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OMG!!! thank you for reccommending me to read this poem! It is very very well written! I don't even know what to say..UR A VERY TALENTED WRITER!!! keep it up! I think i'm going to chek out some of ur other poems for shure! why don't u try and chek mine out?!?! only if u feel up to it! awesome write:)
x0x0~CaNdIe~ |
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Re: My Love
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:39:48 PM AEST
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| this poem touched something deep inside me, keep writing, your words move hearts, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: My Love
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:08:37 PM AEST
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I have read all your posted poems, and they just keep getting better!! This is brilliant, you are such a talented writer. Write some more quick....... lol
Love Dawny x |
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Re: My Love
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by AliB on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:23:45 PM AEST
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Wow!! Are you really as young as you said in the chatroom? You are very talented, what can I say you have hidden depths, awesome!!!!
Ali xx |
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