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Human Puzzle
Contributed by
fldadn1
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Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:51:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Please,
Weak and hating
Past memories fading
Laugh,
controlling and rude
easily change your mood
pity,
poor and cheap
from cuts too deep
words,
random and neutral
mean or fruitful
promise,
lies and crys
from broken promises over time
Counting veins
on a human puzzle
plucking one by one
with black blood
until their all gone
the deed wont be done
Copyright ©
fldadn1
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2004-02-20 19:51:35]
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Re: Human Puzzle
(User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:44:53 PM AEST
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| good and interesting poem. great work! |
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Re: Human Puzzle
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 06:11:36 AM AEST
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Yes, strange it may be, but I enjoyed reading it all the same! Take care
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