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Darkness
Contributed by
_Nikki_
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Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 02:22:16 AM in AEST
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Forgotten
Unloved
Alone
Dead
Some of the words that describe me
You probably don't know how these are true
But soon, very soon, you will understand.
The Darkness fell upon me
Like the striking sun washed away by an overwhelming rain cloud
Like your husbands death facing you, haunting you.
I was scared, oh how scared i was
Never was I expecting the Darkness
I never thought it would wrap its arms around me.
But it did, and now I am forever lost
Not only in my mind, oh no not only there
But also in the Darkness.
Now, I can't explain this Darkness, but I'll try
It's like being abused every minute, every second
Like being lost forever and not being able to ask for help.
You don't understand how I can feel that way
But I tell you, oh i tell you
Someday you will.
No one can escape it
The Darkness strangles everyone it can
And it can get us all if it is willing to, it is.
Do anything you want, anything
But it will still get you
Just like it got me.
Copyright ©
_Nikki_
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2004-02-21 02:22:16]
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Re: Darkness
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:19:20 AM AEST
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| Maybe you're looking in the wrong direction to see the light? I hope to see a happy poem from you, soon. God Bless |
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Re: Darkness
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by AmaNdAsHepArD on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 05:41:56 PM AEST
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| i like ur poem very emotional i know where ur coming from...........we all those *****ty days |
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Re: Darkness
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by Devnet on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 11:54:24 PM AEST
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| This is beauiful. You captured the feelings of depression perfectly. I hope your feeling better now. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Darkness
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by BettieGirl on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:07:51 AM AEST
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| For some odd reason, this poem reminds me of my mother. Excellent poem!! |
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Re: Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 04:10:38 AM AEST
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| My mom calls it The Black Beast. You probably have seasonal depression. I'm cyclothymic, so I feel like that at leaste once a week. Then the vary next day I feel like god. lol |
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