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Messed Up
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 12:21:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's kind of funny
It's kind of sad
It's kind of lonely
It's kind of bad
I'm kind of crying
You're kind of gone
It's all messed up
It's kind of wrong
It's very simple
It's very clear
When I'm in trouble
You won't be near
It's over now
And we're apart
It's very selfexplanatory
That you're still in my heart
I am so hopeless
Now that I'm on my own
It is so understandable
That I don't belong
I try to reach you
But you're so far
And I'm so wondering
Where you are
It's kind of too much
It's kind of boring
It's kind of obvious
That I'm still worrying
It's kind of typical
I kind of knew
You would soon play me
And I would still love you
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New_York_Chick
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2004-02-21 12:21:39]
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Re: Messed Up
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 12:49:16 PM AEST
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I really like the flow of this one.
Great job. And I totally relate. |
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Re: Messed Up
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 03:23:57 PM AEST
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| Very rhythmic. It's neat, and I like it. |
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Re: Messed Up
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 12:46:13 AM AEST
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| awww... a poem with a musical quality, love bites i swear, keep writing, hugs n' love nessa |
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