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Sonnet 103 : Vampire Love
Contributed by
merry
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Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 05:01:51 PM in AEST
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what time did you come, what time did you leave
candles burned down, and wax has gone cold
when daylight arrives my heart starts to grieve
my pale hands tremble as the story's retold
the villagers whisper your name like a curse
unholy creature they called you undead
this nightmare must end before it gets worse
my love could save you, that's what you said
a silver bullet, shot through your dear heart
you said it would free you forever my love
and what of me? is there no poison dart
to whisk me away on wings of a dove
the sun slips down to the promise of night
the noise of death sends us forever in flight
gmm2004
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Re: Sonnet 103 : Vampire Love
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 05:06:19 PM AEST
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| Wow Gaille, I really like this different style from you ... great write ... Jan |
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Re: Sonnet 103 : Vampire Love
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by Love_impossible on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 05:07:27 PM AEST
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| wow.....I liked it....I look forward for more of your work |
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Re: Sonnet 103 : Vampire Love
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 06:14:09 PM AEST
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This is nicely different. I would normally shy from a title like this, but I'm glad I read it. Love the last two lines. "The sun slipping down..." that is just lovely.
Stitch |
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Re: Sonnet 103 : Vampire Love
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 07:21:29 PM AEST
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oh yeah...I love the dark writes and this is great!!! So different than your normal writes but just as breathtaking ;o)
Roses
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Re: Sonnet 103 : Vampire Love
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:53:00 PM AEST
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wow this was awesome mere words could not accolade this enough. Very beautiful.
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Re: Sonnet 103 : Vampire Love
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 09:18:27 AM AEST
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| wonderfully dark, love it, more please:) hugs n' love nessa |
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