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My Shadow
Contributed by
sickness16
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Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:06:04 PM in AEST
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Can you help me find my shadow
It's stolen so many things from me
It has my eyes
He looks into my eyes
It has my skin
He touches my skin
It has my lips
He kisses my lips
He won't look at me
He won't touch me
And he won't kiss me
Without my shadow
Have you seen my shadow
God knows what it's taken from me
It has my beauty
They gawk at my shadow's beauty
It has my smile
They stare at my shadow's smile
It has my body
They envy my shadow's body
They won't gawk at me
They won't stare at me
And they won't envy me
Without my shadow
I'm so lost without my shadow
Do I really need my shadow
It has my friends
I don't need my friends
It has my family
I don't need my family
It has my life
I don't need my life
I don't need my friends
I don't need my family
And I don't need my life
With my shadow
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Re: My Shadow
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:27:40 PM AEST
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| This is a really good write! |
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Re: My Shadow
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:05:31 PM AEST
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| Come from out of the dark, and into the sun light, and you will find your shadow. It is only a step away always at your side. keep them good poems coming..read one of mine ok..Wes... |
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Re: My Shadow
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by Strawberry on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 10:44:36 PM AEST
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very good write
keep it up
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