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Broken Heart
Contributed by
BettieGirl
on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:58:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Another broken heart,
tossed into this vicious world,
Scattering and misplacing an
Already heartless girl
Followed by this shadow
Whos her only soul companion
Feeling worthless and alone
Just like planned in the long run
She bled from love
Lost her own flesh and blood
How much can this poor girl bleed
Sanitys gone
No more love to go wrong
Her dark shadow is all she needs
Misery leaves a crimson trail
In the path that she must take
She cant afford to loose much more
Whats left of her hearts at steak?
Im cold.. Im exhausted
No tears left to cry
Just let me hide, with whats left of my life
As Im placed in this world to die.
11/19/03
Copyright ©
BettieGirl
... [
2004-02-22 00:58:17]
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Re: Broken Heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:31:29 AM AEST
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very heartfelt write indeed!! I have felt this way at a point in my life.. very sad but awesome write!! greatjob!!
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Re: Broken Heart
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:25:07 PM AEST
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| awww this is really sad! really good write! but sad! |
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Re: Broken Heart
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by nite_jade on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:33:26 AM AEST
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| i know how you feel my heart has been broken 3 times now and i feel i can never love again good poem |
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