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invisible
Contributed by
idiotbox
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Monday, 9th September 2002 @ 01:22:17 PM in AEST
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can you see me?
usually people don't
i can walk and talk to you
but do you really see me?
are you one of those who only see's
and cares about the surface?
or do you laugh and act as you care?
what are you who are you?
and why don't you see me?
usually pple don't so i guess
your just like the rest
no harm done really
i can still talk and walk and wave
my hands in dispair hoping for
one sec of acknowledgment
for one twinkle of an eye
its better this way.
i'm not meant to be seen
just felt
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Re: invisible
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by Jazz on
Monday, 9th September 2002 @ 03:15:25 PM AEST
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Wow..tough and deep poem. And I feel you here...Can you see me? And your response is, "No because you are a superficial jerk..."
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