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Sinking
Contributed by
mindset
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Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:52:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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long time now i felt the warmth
deep inside a cold lonely front
i see them inside from an outside realm
yet never touch the things i want
things now seem hard as old can be
and things as young so far away
night now long a cold dark drunk
reality a forest of mind numb junk
a young dream ever found
now just a lonely sound
move on no choice to stop
exist only the ideal movie shop
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mindset
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2004-02-22 13:52:29]
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Re: Sinking
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 03:44:21 PM AEST
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| Good poem! good job rhyming too! |
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