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Desire
Contributed by
mindset
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Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 02:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i often feel a place to find
inside the pain of wonderying why
searching on i see to feel
the warmth of her just walking by
i look upward no heaven there
my ground a place to sit and stare
to touch her hair a dream of mine
the running rivers just her smile
eyes so blue an ocean true
yet just a dream afraid to wake
all is left my body sold
gaizing at a swan so bold
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2004-02-22 14:15:00]
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Re: Desire
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 03:04:08 PM AEST
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Hi mindset,
we have a saying in our country
if you like a girl ,you got to let her know.
not doing so can eat you up.
good poem. |
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Re: Desire
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by PumpkinPie on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:34:20 PM AEST
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Nicely said mindset.You wrote down what I'm feeling perfectly and I like that!
PumpkinPie |
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