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Road Rage
Contributed by
mercedes
on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 04:51:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Once again I'm sitting here Behind the wheel in a jam Traffic is crawling, barely moving at all No way around, just follow along
Tension builds, my teeth clenched shut Stop.....go......stop......go I cannot take much more of this An exit just up ahead
Finally I'm free, take another way home Turn left here, Damn, a dead end Turn around, find a new way In circles I feel I'm going
Stopped again, another red light Wait......wait......whats taking so long?! The light changes to green, a car tries to slip by Crash, bam, an accident, again i'm stuck in a jam
The occupants climb out, no one is hurt They mill about not caring they are in my way Frustration building, i'm beginning to see red Why don't they move off the road?!
Cars behind me honking, everyone wants by I feel my body tensing as rage builds inside My foot slams on the gas, I aim straight ahead If they will not move, I'll push them out of my way
People scatter all about, barely avoiding my tires I smile as i hear a satisfying squeel As metal on metal, i push the crash out of my way Everyones yelling, I simply smile and wave
Off I head, homeward bound Up ahead, high school kids crossing the street They see me coming and slow their walk With a growl I hit the gas, wondering how many I will miss
Too late they try to scramble out of harms way Crunch there bones snap, screams are heard miles away Laughing hysterically, I consider going in reverse Better get home, dinner will be getting cold
Cruising along the back roads I go Hitting anyone I find along the way Adrenaline coursing thru my veins With a grin, I speed off into the night
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2004-02-22 16:51:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Road Rage
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 05:03:40 PM AEST (User
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This is a good poem....a bt on funny side but good! |
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Re: Road Rage
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 05:19:23 PM AEST (User
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LOL. this is my kinda poem! I was grinning at the way you described perfect mania. Been in that mood before. Class in a glass. |
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Re: Road Rage
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 08:24:27 PM AEST (User
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*Smiling*
Loved every word. Kie |
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Re: Road Rage
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 01:27:00 AM AEST (User
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The end was great! The most satisfying feeling i've ever heard of!
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Road Rage
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueheart on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:47:56 AM AEST (User
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Lol. Nice :) |
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Re: Road Rage
(User Rating: 1 ) by uchendu on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:44:29 AM AEST (User
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Helloooo!! you are a wonderful writer.. hit me up and read some of my works.. I need to know how u feel about them.. stay blessed |
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