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internet troubles :S
Contributed by
SAT
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Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:50:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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online is a warzone
with many guns
and u may get shot
b4 the battle is won
and who knows
who is out there
certainly not i
when life is on the line
its hard to get by
a few mesely dollars
wont get you much
but it could save your life
if you meet up with the french
people slowly lose patients
and then just get *****
and once life is gone
you'll regret what you missed
so think about a battle
and fight with caution
because online isn't safe
so think b4 motion.
Copyright ©
SAT
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2004-02-22 18:50:13]
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Re: internet troubles :S
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:55:21 PM AEST
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| good write keep it up,yes it is a war zone.oh read mine called Missing in action.bye Wes... |
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Re: internet troubles :S
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by Kie on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 07:59:44 PM AEST
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| This one made me smile. I liked the perspective I saw in this poem. Humorous, witty and introspective. Great job. Kie |
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