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Talking to Myself
Contributed by
merry
on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 09:33:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~
too tiresome to play
same song over and over
new players
different day
swivel chairs
keep turning around
without direction
where is your
sense of adventure
ready to pack up and leave
fly off to Greece
lie on the beach all day
turn brown
watch the dark eyed men
watching me
smiling back at them
tis what makes the world go round
not sitting here punching keys
worrying about paying bills
and pipes that freeze
set the clock for six
off to bed
sweet dreams
gmm 2004
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merry
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2004-02-22 21:33:50]
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Re: Talking to Myself
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:23:26 PM AEST
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| This is good! really good! |
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Re: Talking to Myself
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by Kie on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:48:43 PM AEST
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*Smiling*
This was good, real good. You made my night!
One great poem, loved every word. Kie
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Re: Talking to Myself
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:49:09 AM AEST
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| You're right Merry ... all we seem to do is pay bills and sit at our computer ... Greece sounds good - I'll come :)))) Jan |
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Re: Talking to Myself
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by Stitch on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 09:36:37 AM AEST
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Captures the thoughts and the moment perfectly.
Stitch |
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Re: Talking to Myself
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by Baronhawk on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:15:36 PM AEST
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| A quaint snapshot...a freezeframe of a moment...a slice of your existance. Nicely done....by the way...talking to yourself is just a tool most of us use in our thinking....usually people who talk to themselves are mentally healthy...it is a symptom but not an indication of insanity....but hten again I am telling you this and i myself doubt my sanity sometimes.... |
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