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The real you in YOU.
Contributed by
venkat
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 07:45:59 AM in AEST
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This soul in a body is an immortal fragment
Of the soul of the whole universe and in fact
It draws with it the mind and five senses
That rest in matter, as the wind carries away
The fragrance from their seat of the flowers
Even so the individual soul, lord of the body
Draws away mind and senses when it goes away
And casts them off to the body it acquires
As a man casts off a worn out garment
And puts on a new garment, similarly
The embodied soul casts off its worn out body
And enters into other which is a new one
As all pervading ether is not tainted
By reason of its subtlety, so the self seated
Every where in the body is also not tainted
Your soul is neither your body nor your mind
Nor senses nor any thing that youve possessed
This soul is neither born nor does it die
Nor being born does it cease to be at any time
It is unborn, eternal, primeval and ever abiding
Never been killed though the body is slain
The soul is uncleavable and incombustible
It can neither be wetted nor dried; it is stable
Immovable, eternal and like a leaf of a tree
It exists as a part of the tree of life of the universe
It shines like a star but thinks as if it were not
The part of heavenly fire; out of its own ignorance
There fore I am to state that all souls of universe
Are like the waves of ocean of consciousness
Dancing eternally with a song of universe
By the voice of Lord in your heart!
( source: Bhagavad Gita )
22-2-2004
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:00:28 AM AEST
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I've not read all of your submissions, but I would expect that this one is, as you say, one of your best. It glows with incandescense of spiritual devotion.
"It shines like a star but thinks as if it were not
The part of heavenly fire; out of its own ignorance"
Excellently described.
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by bhavnas on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:06:40 AM AEST
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| very aptly said.....this body isn't ours , these senses aren't ours ,we r here just on a sojourn , when worn our soul shall search some1 fresh...o u cheater soul...forever looking for new venues....very nice write sir...smiles...bhavna |
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:51:29 AM AEST
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a truth so well told
Shari |
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:59:15 AM AEST
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Eternal wisdom shines through your work...venkat your poem ismagnificent. ..thanks for sharing your divine muse...
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 11:50:35 AM AEST
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| Wow this was one of your best! Very well done,thanks for sharing! Christina |
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:40:34 PM AEST
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As your voice sings celestial...so does your poetic form of words. Always a beauty to behold such glory in "all." A wave of consciousness in an enormous sea of love!!!
Well portayed!
Angel always...godspeed...Joni |
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by Kie on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:53:55 PM AEST
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| A make up of wisdom, inspiration and philosophy. A poetic wonder. You write beautifully Venkat. Loved this one. Kie |
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 07:38:38 PM AEST
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This is very beautiful. One of the truths of the universe. You have most certainly written one of your best pieces here.
Rita |
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:10:08 AM AEST
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Fantabulus!
This is awesome as always!
Very good work, my friend.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:20:16 AM AEST
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| GREAT...ALWAYS GREAT..I CANT PRAISE MORE..K |
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 07:29:40 AM AEST
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| :>) |
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by chandramohan on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 01:31:32 AM AEST
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dear venkat,
The essence of Bhagavat gita is condenced in to a poem in "The real you in you".
The real picture of Atma is portryed in this poem.
Thanks a lot.
chandramohan |
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Re: The real you in YOU.
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:56:30 AM AEST
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| Venkat, this is truly an amazing write. I enjoy reading your writes very much so. *S* Cynthia |
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