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some how
Contributed by
loopylou
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:12:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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your tone is so cold
it wasn't like that yesterday
you say its just a mood
but I can tell something's wrong with you
so is this it?
are we over?
nothings said and nothing's done
I'm not going to let go
your worth a fight
and if i loose it I'll still beg
crying saying "I love u" and I'll mean every word said
because if your moods can change so fast
surely I can turn them back?
I'm sorry if I said something wrong
but if only you could feel the tight pain in my chest
when you refused to say I love you
you'd smile and wink
you'd know no one loves you better then I do
so speak in you cold tone for now
but I'll make it warm somehow
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2004-02-23 16:12:36]
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Re: some how
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:17:09 PM AEST
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| I really think this poem is really good! U have a great talent! |
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Re: some how
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by Twinkle on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:37:40 PM AEST
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| nice one!! from the heart.. |
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Re: some how
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by neglected1 on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:43:10 PM AEST
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| it was good... always room for improvment though |
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