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More and more like a bug!
Contributed by
neglected1
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:23:11 PM in AEST
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More and more like a bug!!
You go through life plunking your heart on your sheath
Not truly understanding why the smear is still there
Occasionally getting struck and stepped on
Recovering with pain just like before
The superficial effects are habitually seen
Your kaput ways and no span to ascend
Motionless though its a distinguished look
Extremely simple minded and in a shell that cannot be broken
Pending that one occurrence and devourers all
Copyright ©
neglected1
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2004-02-23 16:23:11]
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Re: More and more like a bug!
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:09:26 AM AEST
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*Shouts YES*
I'm a bug, I sure feel like one....
Thank you for sharing this, I really enjoyed reading it. I thought it was divine. Kie |
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Re: More and more like a bug!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:25:04 PM AEST
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extreemly well written well done.
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Re: More and more like a bug!
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 08:10:53 PM AEST
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Not bad, not bad at all . . . short, simple, and to the point. Significance and poignance in a few short lines.
regards,
Nora |
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