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prayer
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:20:28 PM in AEST
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Im surrounded by these prison walls, wishing I could stand tall
When all I can do is curl up and cry, pathetic, barely alive
And Ive pushed through so many barriers that scar me; no matter how hard I try
And Im tired of carrying all this weight that cuts me inside
See, you must have forgotten my heart on this factory line
Of slaves offering their lives to serve you, but *****, youre not taking mine
All these perfect faces made just to look at you, just to smile
***** the world, annihilate me, I want each and every one of you to die
Im burning holes into this patchwork mess they call my skin
Trying to melt the mould, change my shape, let me fit in
But I hate you all, I hate this, I hate you, I hate me
And I wish so much I could burn away all the hate inside me
If I could just open your eyes for a second, before you died
And smile at you, as I hold the gun between your eyes
And watch those pretty tears fall down your pretty face, from your pretty lies
As I pull the trigger, yeah God, this is to you
And Im your one and only real child
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Re: prayer
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by Empty_Soul on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:40:25 PM AEST
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| OMG! this is EDITED amazin!! (i wonder if that by passes the filter???) love the last stanza, i feel like u do right now, it EDITED sucks, ice jus had enough of everyones EDITED including my own, but well, they say life goes on...we shall see. |
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Re: prayer
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 06:13:16 PM AEST
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i have to read your poems over and over because they have so much to them..
like i said, this is beautiful and i agree and wow... i wish i could write like that... you are SUCH an inspiration to me Lucie..
char xxx |
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Re: prayer
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:44:07 AM AEST
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| Lots of anger in this one. I read it a couple of times and you know I have had some of these thoughts. Writing is a great way to vent. I look forward to your next submission. Kie |
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Re: prayer
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:09:02 PM AEST
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the anger in this was amazing and unsettling, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I loved the first stanza the best I've been there before many times. I hope to hear from you soon I miss you... Keep up the writing I love it.
Peace,
Joel (Bobo) |
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