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A soulless vessel
Contributed by
AmaNdAsHepArD
on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 10:04:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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No more pain No more sorrow No more tears of blood And razors to protect me For now Im an empty vessel Walking around in a land full of corpses With these cuts upon my wrist And a straw up my nose I ended everything No more pain No more sorrow No more tears of blood I can finally rest Lay my head down And sleep No more shadows No more demons No past, present, or future Just a soulless vessel No more pain No more sorrow No more tears of blood
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Re: A soulless vessel
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:45:44 AM AEST (User
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Sounds good to me. Can I join you?
Great write
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Re: A soulless vessel
(User Rating: 1 ) by crying-crimson-tears on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:39:18 PM AEST (User
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hey...i can really relate to this poem. i really liked this a lot. good job. keep it up. |
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Re: A soulless vessel
(User Rating: 1 ) by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:55:41 AM AEST (User
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I felt exactly the same, i know the emotions you have writen in this very poem. welldone |
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