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the lynching
Contributed by
crimsondream
on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:57:36 AM in AEST
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slide this noose
around my neck
tighten knots
double check
march me to
a wooden floor
beneath my feet
small trap door
pull the lever
watch me fall
my eyes bulge
infront of all
soon the crowd
begins to clap
knife cut scars
my body they map
this is my death
nothing to mourn
blood filled tears
my eyes they adorn
nothing left
nothing to love
nowhere to go
except for above
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crimsondream
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2004-02-24 01:57:36]
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Re: the lynching
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 02:24:23 AM AEST
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| Very Emotional but very good! |
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Re: the lynching
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:25:57 AM AEST
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An exceptionally vivid potrayal, as it reads fluidly and expresses, I believe, all you'd want to express of this sentiment.
"nothing left / nothing to love / nowhere to go /
except for above"
Very emotive, and powerfully written. |
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Re: the lynching
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:21:44 AM AEST
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| i like this. its very sad but makes a good poem. |
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Re: the lynching
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:05:32 PM AEST
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Real friends couldn't "kill you from the inside". Choose your friends carefully, it's your heart that's in danger.
Well written. I love the way you keep rhyme through the whole poem.
Keep writing.
Take care.
Dvaid |
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