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Blackman
Contributed by
Leta
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:18:32 AM in AEST
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A blackman is an educated man.
A blackman is a real man.
A man that can please.
A blackman is a man who will stay on his knees.
He is a man who is hard to please.
A man that stays on the street.
A man that keeps moving and groving.
A blackman is a man with a strong back bone.
But without a strong blackwomen he has no home.
Copyright ©
Leta
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2004-02-24 04:18:32]
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Re: Blackman
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:41:23 AM AEST
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| This is really good! |
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Re: Blackman
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by norm on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:45:41 AM AEST
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The poem's construction is good
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I'm not sure I understand,
Black or white a wedding band
Makes a man more a man,
Takes him from the frying pan..
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Re: Blackman
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by faithmairee on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 09:23:30 PM AEST
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i like this one also...your delivery was on target and the words just seemed to flow...write some more!
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