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Undisturbed Peace pt II
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:54:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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The dead are walking around at night
Looking for little children to fright
And slowly I feel myself getting up
I find my razor and make a cut
My blood flows better than before
And now its my turn to even the score.....
Look, theres Sue, lets scare her
Her loudest scream wont be heard
Slowly I creep up behind
She turns around, now shes mine
She screams in such horrid ways
But I better hurry to be done by day
I show her images of her pitiful life
And then slash her throat with my shiny knife
She falls to the ground, such a beautiful scene
As I take joy in the remembrance of her screams
Daylight is coming, I walk to my grave
Thinking of the pleasures pitiful Sue gave
I go back underground until the next night
When another helpless soul will become my victim of fright.
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CuttersAngel
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2004-02-24 11:54:26]
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Re: Undisturbed Peace pt II
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:35:30 PM AEST
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Creepy, gothic, definitely a "psychotic" poem... almost reads like a NIN music video!!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Undisturbed Peace pt II
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 04:54:59 AM AEST
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| uh uh....NIN is way better....nothing, nothing like this, more like slipknot or ozzy |
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