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Happy Poem 1, and 2
Contributed by
lildrama04
on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:03:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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When I think of happy stuff
I think about my father in heaven.
Remembering that He died for our sins
on the cross.
Every night before I go to bed
I read a chapter in the book of
Matthew about Judas betraying
his only son.
When I think of happy stuff
I think about my father in heaven
Remembering that he died for our
sins on that cross that he had to carry.
When I think to myself why he had to carry
that cross I always remember that he
died for my sins and everyone elses sins.
This one is Number 2
Sitting outside
Looking up into the
Sky.
To see visions in the clouds
On a sunny day
Did he make those visions
Did he tell the clouds to form
That why for the people to see.
I dont know all I know is
That He my father in Heaven
Is the one that has created this
World that we all live in today.
Sitting outside
Looking up into the
Sky.
Copyright ©
lildrama04
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2004-02-24 15:03:48]
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Re: Happy Poem 1, and 2
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:19:54 PM AEST
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Interesting, i like that this makes you happy.... haven't read a lot of things like this.
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Re: Happy Poem 1, and 2
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:21:00 PM AEST
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| This is well written! Very good job! Psalms 91 is good to read too! |
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Re: Happy Poem 1, and 2
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:57:13 PM AEST
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Good happy write. I enjoyed this...
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Re: Happy Poem 1, and 2
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by norticus on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:54:24 AM AEST
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It sounds like you have a good friend in that youth minister's wife. I had a teacher once named Mrs. Iglar who kept telling me to write poems because she thought I had a talent. It was through her that I think I did develop a talent. This poem is deep and good, and I give it a 4.7 on the Nortiscale.
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