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Crippled Pilgrims
Contributed by
secretwind
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:30:26 PM in AEST
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oops
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Blood on the snow
illuminated
by candle light,
casting shadows
on this cruel cold world
and there is no answer
to the question
WHY
we are born to die.
The nightmare
only gets stronger
everytime
a innocent cries...
can't help nobody
so back
back into the mist i fade
to drift in pools
that keep
the vampires alive.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-02-24 15:30:26]
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Re: Crippled Pilgrims
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:39:37 PM AEST
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a dark twisting, peculiar - but i like that vampire line!! good write!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Crippled Pilgrims
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:28:50 PM AEST
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| You have a wonderful talent! This is really good! |
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Re: Crippled Pilgrims
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:17:39 PM AEST
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I don't do vampires but good writing.
Hope all is well with u my friend.
take care of yourself and keep writing.
Holler at me when U feel up to it.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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