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An Everything Poem
Contributed by
lildrama04
on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:34:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This is number one
They don't even notice me
all they can see is what they
want to see.
Why can't I just do it
It feels like something
Is stopping me for a reason
and it drives me crazy.
Where would I go?
Why would anyone care if
I was to just kill myself right now?
They don't even care if
they are hurting me with all
the things that they say about me.
Why can't I just do it
Why can't I just kill myself and
get it over with.
This is Number 2
Why would anybody care
If I was to just
kill myself right now.
Why would anybody care
If I was to leave and
never come back.
Would they be happy
Would they be sad
Who knows anymore
All I know is that
I just don't want to
live anymore.
Why would anybody care
If I was to just go off
and Kill myself.
So this is my final goodbye
This is number Three
Why can't people just
see that they are hurting me
with all the things that they
say about me.
Why can't people just
leave me alone and let me
live my life the way that
I want to live it.
Why can't I just go
through with it.
Why can't I just kill
myself and get it over
with.
Why Can't I just leave
this world and never look
back.
Why Can't people all around
me leave me the hell alone and
let me kill myself.
Copyright ©
lildrama04
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2004-02-24 15:34:15]
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Re: An Everything Poem
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:37:29 PM AEST
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This is a comment... lol, sorry. intersting style, but trust me there is always someone who does care.
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Re: An Everything Poem
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:32:44 PM AEST
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| Well written! |
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Re: An Everything Poem
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by norticus on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:50:45 AM AEST
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Hey this one is one of the best killing myself poems I've read. In it you keep asking, Why would anyone care if you killed yourself? The interesting thought is one unsaid - why do you care if anyone cares if death is what you really want. This poem shows how a suicidal maniac really just wants someone to care. Death seems reasonable but inside you know it just isn't going to work. I like the Freudian line in the 4th from the bottom stanza that says "I want to live it" The suicidal subject wants to live, wants to be understood, and wants to understand him/herself. This is a keeper - just like you are.
I give this a 4 on the Nortiscale.
norticus |
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