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just a thing of life
Contributed by
bonewiz326
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:14:03 PM in AEST
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Judging lifes
and peoples past
does that make u better
I kno how it feels to not be loved
laying awake wondering
can anything be better then now
laying awake thinking this can be my last day
Anything to say
The simple star
In heavens light
is the only thing
I have at night
and the simple touch
of a good friends words
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2004-02-24 16:14:03]
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Re: just a thing of life
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:23:13 PM AEST
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FRIENDS IS SOMETHING YOU DON'T TAKE FOR GRANTED! GOOD POINT & WELL WRITTEN!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: just a thing of life
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:25:51 PM AEST
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just a thing is quite a big thing... i like the message of this!
~Remy~ |
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Re: just a thing of life
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:51:35 PM AEST
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| this is really well writen! Good job! |
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