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Can you...
Contributed by
Lolita
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:16:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Can you stop a second,
To hear me screaming across a crowded room,
To hear me crying your name,
Banging on the inside of a locked up box,
Begging to be heard, to be noticed.
Can you give me a moment,
To see me bleeding to be closer to you,
To see me needing your touch,
Crawling on floors edge nearer to love,
Kneeling on four to sumbit to your needs.
Can you promise me everything,
To speak of all things true and pure,
To speak of our love undying,
Scraping nails across a blackboard,
Infecting, injecting poisoned passion in you.
Copyright ©
Lolita
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2004-02-24 16:16:13]
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Re: Can you...
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:20:24 PM AEST
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IF SOMEBODY WOULD ONLY GIVE YOU A MINUTE OF THEIR TIME,IT WOULD BE WORTH A LIFETIME! THAT'S WHAT IT SOUNDS LIKE TO ME,VERY WELL TOO!! IT'S
A WELL FELT POEM,WITH A GOOD TO TELL EFFORT!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Can you...
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:20:53 PM AEST
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whoa... lady stalker!! lol, just kidding... this is wow, uh, yea: just WOW!!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Can you...
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:53:53 PM AEST
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| This is well done....i cant relate to this very well! |
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