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All This Pain
Contributed by
deathwriter
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:29:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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All the pain you cause me, leaves with a few deep cuts. They drip and flow out just like my blood. Its like a crimson red river of pain, memories, love, and lies. The pain is now gone, but my scars will forever remind me of what you put me through.
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Re: All This Pain
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:42:29 PM AEST
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| Really good! I hope the best for you |
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Re: All This Pain
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:12:00 PM AEST
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| Great write. Great similie.I really enjoyed it. I hope you feel beter soon. |
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