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The Battle
Contributed by
Elf
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:48:45 PM in AEST
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It's driving me insane;
The way I feel.
You're always on my mind,
Running through my thoughts.
I can't ignore it anymore,
Like I used to do.
But then I begin to think.
Do I really want to?
Do I want to forget you?
The way you make me feel?
The battle between my heart and mind
is driving me insane.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2004-02-24 21:48:45]
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Re: The Battle
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by Shadow on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:19:27 PM AEST
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| Short but o to sweet. If this is based on a true question then all i can say is try it. Who knows where it will lead. Good or bad you can take it either way. Your strong. Now about the poem. I liked the flow. It was a little short but a poem isn't truely judged on size. Good job. |
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Re: The Battle
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:11:07 PM AEST
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The heart will never forget the love that has passed through it, while the mind chooses to forget the whole thing, because it is now no more than a memory.
May your battle end in the best way possible.
Take care.
David |
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