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My Anchor
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:11:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Some times I just want to quit the race
To quit running
To lay down in the middle of the track
Then I see your smiling face
I hear your gentle words
I dont have it in me to fight anymore
I dont want to quit
I dont want to disappoint you
I dont know what to do or what to say
I dont want to lose this battle
I need something to hold on to
I need to see your smiling face
I need to hear your encouraging voice
I need you too much for words
I need you more than the air I breathe
Its almost 12 am this shall pass
You helped me
You were there
I made it this time and will make it the next
For I know you need me too
As the clock flips over
Smile is back in place
Does it really belong there I do not know
But there it is and there it stays
Till the next time that I will need you again!
Copyright ©
lil_angel
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2004-02-25 04:11:46]
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Re: My Anchor
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:20:34 AM AEST
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| well done when you find out who you need i'm sure they will be very grateful for the poem! insomnia,inspiration same thing realy i feel a poem coming on.... |
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Re: My Anchor
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:22:14 AM AEST
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Yup, I still like it as much as I did a little while ago! :) I do like this one . . . prob'ly one of my favorites of yours, actually. Anyhow, nice job. Keep it up!
--Nora |
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Re: My Anchor
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by silent on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:30:50 AM AEST
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| Very well constructed, great write, especially for such a late hour :) |
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Re: My Anchor
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:37:13 AM AEST
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| Well-paced and well-versed. Nice. |
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Re: My Anchor
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 07:02:49 AM AEST
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Very nicely done.. I loved this...
Jenni |
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Re: My Anchor
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:01:12 AM AEST
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Nice write. Know the feeling well.
Stitch |
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Re: My Anchor
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:09:16 AM AEST
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I'm posting this comment pretty late at night (imagine that!) Nice job. I'm glad you have someone to think about in times like this.
Keep it up |
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Re: My Anchor
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by emystar on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 06:41:00 PM AEST
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wow, This is very good!
U could be talking to God or a future mate.
either way it's a very good write as u write and find peace enuff to to keep on keeping on.
The scripture in the bible is, This to soon shall pass.
luv, huggs,
emy
Thank U so much for all your comments and support of my work. |
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Re: My Anchor
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:14:46 PM AEST
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| I feel you! This happens to me every night. Just keep remembering that it will end in a bit. Don't give up! Excelent write! |
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Re: My Anchor
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:50:03 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful write lit. *S* Cynthia |
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