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Feel
Contributed by
silent
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:52:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Gazing into those eyes of pain
It's what i crave for, again and again
Exactly like an addictive drug
Numbing out pain, feeling no love
My pain i mean, feeding off yours
Delving into your mind, finding the cause
But i already know the truth inside
It's something your eyes, cannot hide
Watching reactions, trying to conceal
You cannot hide, as i already feel
Connected to you, so very strong
But it cannot last for very long,
For i search so deep, tis trivial to find
Your kind of pain inside my mind
Therefore i make my weapons of choice
Twisted thoughts, and lying voice
Longing to open, walking out
Behind this door i scream and shout
Escape i see is finding the last
Breath of life
It will come
And with it death
Freedom and my journeys end.
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silent
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2004-02-25 04:52:25]
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Re: Feel
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:02:39 AM AEST
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| very thought provoking a nice piece of work. |
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Re: Feel
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by fallensilence on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:50:35 PM AEST
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very good, i like the way this was written.- david
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