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Chill one gets
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:42:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Love is something truely magnificent
only two lovers could explain the real sensations
Everyone longs for a piece of the action
but only a few will recieve it
Love is something that connects two people
In a way like no other chemistry could
It is the way in which two souls combine
It is the when their eyes would first meet
Love is a feeling unlike no other
Lifting them above the ground when they kiss
the floating illusion is not to be laughed at
For so many do fear it
Love is the chills that get sent down one's spine
When they hear the voice of their partner
But for so few people in the world
Love is forever after
Love is something to always be treasured
if recieved do try to accept it
For you may not always get a cnance of love
So don't let anyone break it
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2004-02-25 05:42:12]
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Re: Chill one gets
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:55:01 PM AEST
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I love this one, really captured the emotion within the poem, love the structure and the flow and the wording is great,
great write
Luke xx |
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Re: Chill one gets
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by gery_giggles on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:55:44 PM AEST
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i know this feeling....going trough it now and it is wonderful...love can be cruel but it is great to have and to share......great write
luv always |
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