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Eye contact
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:26:01 PM in AEST
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Give me eye contact.
Acknowledge my existence once in a while.
I paint my thoughts across stones that I throw at you.
I always miss your head....
The air feels heavy like a feather...
floating towards the ground,
making the sound,
of a surreal Winters afternoon,
lost just like an airbourne baloon.
Insecurities, in my mind. Something of a different kind.
Its easy to be loved when you're trying so hard to be hated.
Things change
rearrange
but oh how to be caught in the exchange.........
I'd wish you'd give me eye contact girl...
I wish you'd see me the way I see you.
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broken-glass
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2004-02-25 14:26:01]
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Re: Eye contact
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:54:06 PM AEST
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| I really liked this one especially the metaphore of .[I paint my thoughts across stones that I throw at you.] good one keep them coming.oh comment one of mine please. |
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Re: Eye contact
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 03:39:32 PM AEST
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| This was so unique and I loved the expressions you used in this poem. Great one! Kie |
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Re: Eye contact
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 03:39:35 PM AEST
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| This is a great peice! |
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Re: Eye contact
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by dolly_dagger on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 06:51:07 PM AEST
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| *silently appreciates another poem* |
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Re: Eye contact
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:28:41 PM AEST
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Beware Chris, it 'tis is true....if they can't look at you.......hollow they be....no depth you see!
People like this make me feel invisible....not tangible.....I don't like the feeling. I want a club to hit them between the eyes, and then after getting their attention helping them realize.......it's bad manners on their part! You said it so eloquently as usual......great poem Chris.......as usual!! Our eyes are windows to our soul.....if someone won't let you take a peek.......they may either have something to hide....or are very weak!
love you
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