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Moonlit II
Contributed by
Lainda
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:29:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Moonlit
Be not terrified of this blindness
Instead welcome the gloomy abyss
Then shall the veil be lifted from the sight
As you look upon the true colors of the night
Frosted crescent flattering the tides
Entrancing gust blossoms nigh
Winking orbs splatters heavens azure
Hearken to a satin breeze, sighs slurred
Ivory trimmed waves bow toward waters cease
Thrashing waves lazily decrease
Rippled surface boast an echoed night sky
Yet soon the blazing inferno ignite
Then take within one last picture in the mind
Youve glimpsed what many care not to find
Pity those who are too busy to discover
Hope for those with their heads under covers
*My first poem didn't have a message ot theme to it.
Copyright ©
Lainda
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2004-02-25 16:29:16]
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Re: Moonlit II
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by apollo on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:03:48 PM AEST
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| very great imagery. i really liked the last line "hope for those with their heads under covers." that is amazing. |
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