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Falling Star
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:31:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Theres so much I've never told,
These secrets that I hold,
Wear me down to dust,
Break my mind and body
I tried to tell you so many times,
But why would you listen,
To mummy's special child,
How could you deal with
What happened to me
Its hard to confess these feelings,
A systamatic approach to destruction,
By keeping all of them,
Deep inside me, within my heart
I wish I wasnt scared of it,
I wish it didnt kill me,
Eating me from the inside,
Clipping my wings,
Your angel
The fallen star
I'll keep my secrets till the grave,
Never tell you, keep crying at night,
I just cant get over what happened,
Why did I let it,
Why did I
And now I'm falling from your grasp,
I know you still love me,
And that hurts me even more,
Because I hurts to speak,
Dont want to hurt you,
Just want to say
You never knew it ever happened,
And I'm so glad of that,
Because you wouldnt know what to say,
Wouldnt know what to think,
That your little angel,
Was falling to pieces,
Heading to destruction,
Like a falling shooting star
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-02-25 17:31:20]
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Re: Falling Star
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:15:19 PM AEST
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wow.... this is such a stunning story (ooh, nice alliteration-- such a stunning story.....lol)
But yeah, this was great. "I know you still love me/ And that hurts me even more" That's a genius couple of lines right there. Explains the situation beautifully. Just out of curiosity, what is the situation exactly? (or should I just butt back into my own business? either way....) Just wondering.
In any case, I enjoyed reading this.
God bless,
Ellen
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Re: Falling Star
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:33:27 PM AEST
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These poems today concern me. If talking to a stranger might help just to bounce things off of, I just want you to know I am here to listen. Not talk, just listen.
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Re: Falling Star
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:48:05 PM AEST
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each word circled me and drew me in great job
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Re: Falling Star
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:25:21 PM AEST
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Wow...captivating write.....
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