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A Poet's Tears
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:02:47 PM in AEST
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Such pretty tears do poets cry,
Like crystal fragments shining bright,
They flow like diamonds from the eye,
And glisten in the faintest light,
Darkness of winter to sun of spring,
Enchanting you within your room,
Sweet flowing tears a poet brings,
Breathe in fragrance as it blooms,
Salty tears carry life's sorrow,
Filling rivers with hearts regret,
Salt that fills the seas that borrow,
The poets words caught in the net,
Let them fall and flow with grace,
And gather strength from tears set free,
A writer's heart and soul embrace,
When tears flow in their poetry.
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:09:44 PM AEST
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| not my tipical style, but i know what you mean. i like the way the poem sounds so much that im gonna give ya a 5 on it |
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:15:18 PM AEST
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*Bravo!*
What an awesome collaberation! Loved every word... Kie |
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by Devlina on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:16:26 PM AEST
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| I love it! I can soooo relate to this one. Good write. |
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:27:50 PM AEST
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Great work...by some of my fav poets.... Loved this...
Jenni |
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:42:45 PM AEST
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| ladyfawn, this is a beautiful write. It made my heart melt. It describes the poet to a tee. I go through this all the time. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:57:29 PM AEST
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Well done guys !Loved reading it,beautiful flow of the words !
PumpkinPie |
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 12:15:16 AM AEST
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Wow you guys did a great job on this poem!
I see great poet work well together!
Loved it! Bravo! Christina |
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:17:43 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, well done. |
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by venkat on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:32:22 AM AEST
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"crystal fragments shining bright, flow like diamonds from the eye, and glisten in the faintest light,"..
yes poets.. they are real sapphires...even God fails value them..
"Salty tears carry life's sorrow, filling rivers with hearts regret, salt that fills the seas that borrow"
yes poets, as long as human life is full of sorrows the sea should remain salty for it shares the life of rivers..
Dear poets I enjoyed your excellent poetry..Venkat
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 06:57:32 AM AEST
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Holy crap that's awesome
What a team! lol
~ Moonlit |
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:42:55 AM AEST
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| Honestly, there couldnt have been a better combination of poets. Beautiful poem. |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:53:55 AM AEST
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Oh! So glad I caught this before I logged out! Nice collaboration, you have created a great work of art.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:00:52 PM AEST
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Wow friend,
U got it going on here.
This one certainl puts credit where it's due.
tottally awesome.
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:58:39 PM AEST
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| You guys did an excellent job. I had to come back and read this again. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by faithmairee on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:56:48 PM AEST
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another great piece...you are amazing...the thought occurred to me while reading your excellent write that perhaps God counts the tears of poets..afterall, we have so much to give and a poet's lips to speak out with...i love your writer's voice!
Faith |
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by Queen_Dolly on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:30:05 PM AEST
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So elegant and beautiful =)
I like it.
Queen_Dolly |
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:47:08 PM AEST
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Some of the most extrodinary poets come together to write something as heavenly as this. Sweet in its entirity (sp?) and absolutely masterful. I give it a HUNDRED STARS, a hundred times over! :)
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Re: A Poet's Tears
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by Alovinmann on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:04:18 PM AEST
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| Sweet I like it! XXOO's ALOVINMANN |
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