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Expressions Exploding From Mind
Contributed by
RobertWilliamGruhn
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 12:36:37 AM in AEST
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Blown beyond simple comprehension,
Finding hidden whirling tasks,
Reaction reeling to unwind,
Sucking wind from vacuum.
Bouncing ideas off rejection,
Landing in unmade puddles,
Impressions one would steal,
Cold hard metal facts.
Looking at nothing seen,
Flying past undaunted future,
Head above swirling tomorrows,
Bottom drowning between lines.
Hills in distant vision,
Between eyelids and horizon,
Scraping cloudy sky dreams,
Rain drops replacing sadness.
Changing times thoughtfully dead,
Seconds away from eternity,
Lost skeptically below forever,
Farming out excess imagination.
Stroking faces never touched,
Still kissed by infatuation,
More given less wanted,
Grasping at valued nothingness.
To dance beneath waves,
Crashing on rockless desire,
Held in cruel suspension,
Blending into blueless obscurity.
Copyright 2004 Robert William Gruhn A.R.R.
Copyright ©
RobertWilliamGruhn
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2004-02-26 00:36:37]
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Re: Expressions Exploding From Mind
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by Remy on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:37:21 PM AEST
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insert word noodling, a dash of comprehension, plus a pound of interest... peculiar, i like it!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Expressions Exploding From Mind
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by spider on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 04:18:42 PM AEST
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| really amazing. good use of language, kind of ambigious. guess can be taken as is wanted cuz some of my friends took it as really happy, i just saw it as the truth |
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