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Violent Storms
Contributed by
Twitch06
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:01:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Lying here, listening to the Violent Storm.
I hear the Violent Thunder,
I see the Innocent Rain.
I hear this Violent Storm almost every night.
Sometimes it quiets down.
But sometimes it grows strong and Violent again.
I hate these Storms that I hear.
I just want them to stop.
Every time that I hear them,
I'm always afraid of what might happen.
These Violent Storms usually come late at night.
I always encounter then when I least expect it.
These particular Storms happen in all the seasons,
Whether it's summer or winter,
They still come rolling in.
Still lying here, the Storm still goes on.
The Violent Thunder, the Innocent Rain.
When it becomes morning,
I still see the Innocent Rain pouring down,
But the Thunder still rumbles in the distant, almost faint.
Or at least, till night comes again.
....So, in case you haven't understood what I wrote, it's about my parents who come home and fight (not physically, just verbal) And sometimes, they don't even know that I'm awake hearing them going on....
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Twitch06
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2004-02-26 03:01:16]
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Re: Violent Storms
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by doug on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:19:00 AM AEST
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my parents used to fight all the time to and i hope things get better for you and for them.
very good poem keep it up your friend doug |
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Re: Violent Storms
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by Aika on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:02:13 AM AEST
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| wishing you better times.. no thunders, no storms.. just a pure rain to wash out your sadness and bring you sunrays.. :-) love, aika:-) |
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Re: Violent Storms
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by poeticallyspoken on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:03:39 AM AEST
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| wow i was really feeling you. i felt every word that was in that poem. I also wish you better day which will surly come |
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Re: Violent Storms
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by bj on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:13:51 AM AEST
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| beautifully done! hoping for no more storms for you.. |
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